creative writing

Death in life

dandilyonz4u

Life passes by

silently

silent as the wind

I remain in one place

In one corner

In one room

except when

I  have to make an appearance.

Sometimes I think

of things

to do

of people

I could meet

sometimes I even

make a move

but then I remain.

I find the effort

overwhelming

I find more harmony

In the depths of

my thoughts

my mental creations

of a life

the life

where I participate

where I too

have a plethora of

thing to do

things to say

where I’m not

Invisible

and life doesn’t just

whisper softly

as if  tiptoeing by.

source: https://prometheuscomic.wordpress.com/2009/02/page/2/
source: https://prometheuscomic.wordpress.com/2009/02/page/2/

Published by dandilyonz4u

I am 26 years old. I currently live, work and study in Jamaica. I have a wide background in the literary arts as I have studied literature all throughout high school and majored in Literature in College. I believe that literature can be a source of inspiration for the reader and freedom for the writer. I have dabbled in a bit of writing before and actually managed to write about ten poems. I was really proud of them, however, I stored them on my cell phone and now I don't have the phone anymore and neither my poems. I realize that that is not the best place to store my thoughts and I have decided to use another medium.

2 thoughts on “Death in life”

  1. Honey, I think you have a special talent of putting your inner self into very explicit words for the outsiders as myself to see clearly your image and understand your message.

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    1. Special is such an awesome word. and to think I only recently started writing poetry. Its so amazing that the more I read the easier it becomes to express my own thoughts

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